الاثنين، 21 مايو 2012

chapter 21

writer note: haha it's to exciting to write chapter 21 loool but it gets us closer to the end but im so into the writing for don't be sad i'll write other stories as long as im alive ;D



back to the story:



so i was suprised to find the lobby designed with a decoration


everyone suddenly screamed




HAPPY BIRTH DAY



oh is it my birthday? i toally forgot about it =)) loooool

i can't believe this this so amazing!!!!


the decoration the cake everything



me:awwww thank you guys your the best walla <3



lamya:w msweneli enti w saud fe m63m


me:e7mdi rabk yashe5a tra ana eli gayltlh w rj3ti bet w mswenlk surprise tra it's all was my plane



lamya:happy birthday yalla your 17



naif:e5 w kbro albzraan =))


me:o9 bs

so i hugged each but when i reach to saud i hugged him even more tightly he did too

saud whispered in my ear


saud:happybirthday my wife i really love you


me:me too


so we eat a cake and i got my gifts

from naif: he got me a beautiful dress


from lamya:i got a beautiful ring


from dalal:i got a beautiful bag

from my mum is the best i got :an iphone


from 5alti amal:also a beautiful bag


from saud :a beautiful dress too

there was a card from saud gift well each person brought a card but i didn't bother myself to check i mean of course it's happy birth day blah blah


but i opened saud ones it said:tonight you wear that dress happy birth love



awwww how cute but what's about tonight?i love saud really from the bottom of my heart i really do


and my whole family including auntie amal and lamya and dalal i mean i can't believe they would rent a whole lobby for just a  my birth day



i felt so happy the smile didn't vanish from my face


so it was perfectly fine they made my day<3



i took a permstion from my mother to be with saud tonight she said yes i mean were engaged no excuse can bother us<3


they all left even saud? i was still in the apartment weird why did he left?


okay so i'll also decribe my hotel in florida i know it's to late but i have too since it deals with next scane



the hotel is conceted with a park very beautiful park

same for our rooms 3 rooms 1 living room 3 bathrooms and a balacony


 so also the park has a fantsy caffe


i got pings


saud:

PING!!!

PING!!!!
PING!!!!

me:halla?


saud:be ready at 9 pm


me:ok



so i went put a little make up and wore the dress the saud bought it to me


it was from a top from the toping of the dress and it was long and black

i left my culy hair with the wind;p and wore a flat


it was 8:55


i was still making myself in the mirror suddenly a flash of a camera was behind took one picture


i turn around

me:what's about the picture?


saud:something to show our kids that they have a pretty mother


i blushed really hard!!!


did i mention saud was looking hot too

!!!


he was smiling at the way i blushed


his dimples is so amazing!!!


he grabbed my hand and took me to the park of the hotel to the fantsy caffe

i got surprised he lead to a table with roses and candles it was so amazing!!!!!



me:just like the movies


saud:if the movies were your fantsy world i promised i'll make it a reality to see your smile


i blushed he was so amazing


charming


hot


caring<3


i wrote on bbm stautes :thank you to all of my family specially saud <3


did i mention yes i forgot to delete haifa from my bbm list


i checked my bbm while saud was gone to the bathroom


haifa:kkef saud?


me:w enti wsh 3leek?


haifa:esh mswelk?



me:it's none of your bussnies


haifa:don't be rude it's just a question


me:but i know where the answers will lead me with such a hoes like you and your little friend



haifa:3la zg we are not a hoes


me:oh between a hoe is a compliment to you here is the insult a really short insult BITCHES



saud arrived

i showed him the chat


he grabbed my phone and done something with it but i really don't know what have he done


i checked the bbm chats to check if she read it or not suddenly i found haifa dispeared from my bbm contact lists



me:did you deleted her?


saud:yeah


me:lol why?


saud:she will brake our night


i blushed

so me and saud chatted a little and had a really amazing fantsy night <3



when we went back to the apartment


i changed into a boxer and a shirt


i try to search for my laptop but i guess i didn't brought it from riyadh ufff


i checked lamya and dalal they are too


i went to saud and naif room

and yes our family didn't arrived back from where they are



me:saud


saud:3yonh


me:did lamya brought with her a laptop or naif?


saud:naif i don't guess so he brought an ipad but i did you can barrow mine


me:no i'll use naif ipad


saud:just take it


me:thank you saud for everything<3


saud:told you it's one from milion other surprises

i smiled looking down to the floor and blushing



he laughed


so i did took his laptop when i opened it OH GOD THIS IS SUPRISING HE IS SO AMAZING<3









i found the picture he took with his canon today of me on the laptop back ground



i blushed i could recist it aahhhhhh he is amazing


i changed my bbm stautes into:7mdullah 3la nu3mh eli 36etni eyah <3





BBM CHAT:


saud:esh n3ma?


me"you



saud:really;$


me:totally<3



saud:<3



THE END OF THE BBM CHAT



so i checked twiiter i got a mention from saud saying


@reemaalfalni
is amazing



i mentioned back @saudalflani your eyes are<3


i tweeted a little communicat with my friends



and closed the laptop and went to my bed and slept



NEXT DAY:


i woke up on the sound of lamya screaming:wake up



me:what ;/?


lamya:gomi we will go to fastival hurry<3



me:alllaaaaaah


i jumed on my bed


dalal:bdaal ma tn66en knk grd 3'yri mlabskkk


so i wore an adidas black shirt  and a skinny jeans and wore toms shoes



the whole family went to the fastival it was amazing


we ride the roll coster and many other games and eat on our way cause they were many small shops for food it was crowded


there was a halloween house yes a scary one


lamya:yalla nd5l ya g3daaaan



me:not sure about it



dalal:yallaaa bla s5afa


they grabbed my hand leading me to the gate


it was just me and the girls and the boys were waiting outside



it was so crowded inside so i lost lamya and dalal



*LAMYA POINT OF VIEW*



i thought reema is following us the moment we were done from the game i realize she is still inside



me:al5blh leen al7een jwa =))


dalal:ymkn o3'ma 3leeha 3nd bones body lamn 6a7 3leena



naif:eh ymkn mra 5wafh hey =))



we were talking and it's been more than 10 minutes and she is still inside




*SAUD POINT OF VIEW*


i wasn't paying attention of what they were talking about i was just worried about her


   a load speaker suddenly said:there is an petition electric
please all the people inside the halloween house may got to the exit



me:now im really worried about her!!!



naif:7ta ana bd5l a6l3ha



dalal:mjnon ent?



naif:uff wsh al7l



the loud speaker said again: attention to all the people who is inside the halloween house do not touch any thing and go out from the exit



and i saw two guys running to with the emergency bag in their hands


i went to game gate and left naif and lamya and dalal without notcing


they secuirty guy pushed me saying:im sorry but you can't go in there


me:i lost a friend in this game i need to find her she is not out yet



the secuirty guy: you mean thin girl with normal hight and light brown eyes?


me:YES!!



the secirty :she is in the emergency section









WHAT HAPPENED NEXT FIND OUT AT CHAPTER
22

هناك 10 تعليقات:

  1. can't wait to read chapter 22 tomorrow enshaallla ;)

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  2. Plzzzzz aby yjy bsor3a bokra ,, aby a3ref aish 9ayer fe reema ,, in shaa allah a9br 3la bokra ,, bss pkzz nzleeh bokra in shaa allah
    Remmeber me I'm the secound fan of your story

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    الردود
    1. sure i will remember you sweet heart<33


      im glad i got such an amazing readers <#7mdullah

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  3. I love you story , amazing ! Just make it a happy ending PLEASE =D

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    الردود
    1. loool i'll try my best and make it more exiting so i can get more amazing comments like this<3

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  4. Can u just post chapter 22 plzzzzz
    I'm sooooo excited to see what happend next

    From: secound fan of your story

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